Hope for Tomorrow

posted June 21st, 2014, 11:00 am


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June 20th, 2014, 8:50 pm

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In the right hooves, this is just the tool you need!

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June 21st, 2014, 3:34 pm

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@Lugbzurg:

Ingenuity, Fatality, MORTAL KOMBAT.

Get ready, Strike!

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June 21st, 2014, 8:14 pm

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I'm still not sure why I'm still reading this... Maybe I just feel like I have to see this through to the end, since I've already sat through the rest of it at this point...

At the same time, I've said it a few times already, and I'll say it again: This is a DEEPLY flawed comic. But it doesn't deserve a 1 out of 10. I'd say it's probably a 5 out of 10. On the 4-star scale I usually use, this rates at about 2 out of 4, which I can sum up as, "Decently entertaining, but not really anything spectacular."

Really, the only part that I can really call a "trainwreck" is the Fluffle Puff fiasco, and that's only because your rigid schedule and panel restrictions caused it to drag out far, far longer than it should have.

I'd also like to say that your use of premade and occasionally modified vectors is done in a very creative fashion, given how much that would limit you.

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June 22nd, 2014, 10:07 pm

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@Jarkes: I am... THE LAW! And I'm also a rather amateur writer. This isn't my first time trying to write something with a degree of seriousness. That would be The Legacy of Dark Sonic (formally called "The Legacy of Black Sonic"). It was terrible. Like... you thought Shadow the Hedgehog was misguided in its attempts at being dark and edgy? This was far, FAR worse. So... I can see that I have at least improved somewhat since that mess. But I've still got a long way to go.

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June 22nd, 2014, 10:16 pm

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@Lugbzurg:

Don't ever tell anyone you're an amateur. People will just assume the first thing you create is the best thing you have to offer and ignore everything you've made once you're turned professional.

LOL

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